Thursday, February 26, 2015

Rewrite Option for Nurzhan Question

On the Smarter Balance test, students will be expected to write longer answers to questions which will be hand scored by people.  By longer I mean about 6-8 sentences.  But the length does not matter as much as really proving the topic sentence.

The scores are on HAC.  I feel that many students could do better.  I will hand back the scored pieces tomorrow and give them the option to rewrite the response.

I am going to stress again that they follow the outline provided below.

              Nurzhan Question
                      Brainstorming Sheet (Google Doc)
                                                       (Word Doc)


What role does Nurzhan play in resolving the conflict?

(You may type and submit this online.  See link onWednesday, February 25, on my daily pages.)

Rubric: Response is an evidence-based explanation that provides two pieces of evidence from the source that support the claim and clarify why each is a good example.

Organization:
Restate the question in your topic sentence:
           Example: Nurshan plays a large role/no role/some part in resolving the

                            conflict in “My Favorite Chaperone.
Explain the conflict.
Explain the effect of Nurzhan on the conflict.
Explain the role he had in resolving the conflict.

Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Assignments Due

The 25 questions for My Chaperone are due now.  Have them tomorrow if needed.

Students will have answered one of the seven questions from page 28 in their text books.  This will be about six sentences proving they understand the story and can pull details to answer. They will submit this Wednesday. (See below)


Students will have written a long answer response on My Favorite Chaperone.  That is due Friday.  The response should be between 500-700 words or so.  There should be many details used from the story to explicate the theme.  Here is the brainstorming sheet.


Finally, students will take a quick multiple choice assessment on My Favorite Chaperone using the responders.  We will discuss the results as practice for standardized testing.


Thursday, February 19, 2015

IMPORTANT INFORMATION for Mr. Bosler's upcoming assignments

HOMEWORK:
 I would like students to finish reading My Favorite Chaperone using their online books.  Each student in class today was shown how to do this.  They should also answer the questions.

Here is the book.
Here are the questions.
Share your questions with me so I can grade them: mrbozhb@gmail.com
E-mail me if you need your username and password again: mrbozhb@gmail.com

The close reading questions the students are responsible for are good for discussing the story as we read.  They are asking the students to analyze.  And I still want them all answered and ready for discussion so they can be checked for accuracy soon.

Here is what I have created for the next few pieces of writing. 
 It is a work in progress and will be on this page.  


The writing for Smarter Balance requires students to write extended responses which have a clear focus and use multiple pieces of evidence from texts.  At the conclusion of this unit, students will have read multiple pieces on the theme of immigrants.  They will be asked to write an expository essay on the experiences of immigrants.  

Essay 1: Due March 2nd-ish

I would like the students to write an essay on My Favorite Chaperone first. (Different classes will have different length expectations. Grade based on supports.)
  1. How are the events in the rising action magnified (worse) for Maya's family because they are immigrants?  Contrast the American experience with the immigrant experience.
  2. Describe how the writer conveys the immigrants' experience in America through the use of characters such as Maya and her family. Go through each character and describe what we learn from each.
  3. Find at least three uses of imagery in the story that express the immigrant's experience in America.  Describe how these external images reflect the internal experiences of the characters in the story.

To get started on these all of these, go through the story and compile examples of the immigrants' experiences in America.  For example, early in the story Maya's brother was being bullied.  However, we come to find that the custodian at the school was bullied the same way when he was younger. 

Ven Diagram: Due March 5?
I would then like them to compare and contrast the experiences of those characters with the experience of the author of the memoir Bonne Annee.  This can be a shorter piece, or maybe even just a graphic organizer or brainstorming.

Research
Students will then research informational articles.  One article we will read is from our book: A Place to Call Home- What Immigrants Say About Life in America.  Students will learn to take notes.  They will also be expected to find one or two more sources on their own, or I will copy articles if they do not have computer access due to testing.

Expository Essay: Date to be determine
I will help the students to organize their essays around a focusing statement.  For example, being an immigrant in America is hard. They could then go through the three pieces they read, discussing how each piece helped them to arrive at that conclusion.

Students could also discuss various aspects of being an immigrant that were covered in all three pieces.  For example, immigrants feel more stress than citizens of the country.  (I don't know if that is true.  I am just throwing that out there.)  They will have three body paragraphs, one on each aspect.  Within each paragraph, they will use examples from the three pieces.

I will have better outlines as we approach the time to organize and write.

Hopefully we will have computer access so students can type the essay up in class. 






Wednesday, February 18, 2015

Interims are Friday

We discussed irony using this picture.
Each student was given a grade slip and the make-up work today.  That work needs to be returned ASAP.

We started a new story today, "My Favorite Chaperone."  We will be reading the story in class and applying the skills I taught during Searching for Bobby Fisher.

I suggest students read the story in their online book.
          This way they can read the story twice. (starts on page 3)

I suggest students take time to answer these questions well.
         I will eventually ask them to submit answers to some of them for a grade,  like I did for the movie.

If a student needs his/her login for the book, please e-mail me: mrbozhb@gmail.com.

Monday, February 16, 2015

Section 1 HAC update

Think SNOW
I read the Bobby Fischer theme pieces submitted using Google Docs.  I provided feedback using comments.  What I found is I should have limited the topics.  My questions required too much writing to fully explain, yet I had asked the students to shoot for 500 words.  I should have made questions that were more focused.  Therefore I scored the writing looking at if the students could identify the theme of the movie and generally explain how the screenwriter conveyed the theme.  The best pieces were over 1000 words, unfortunately.

If a student did not get an A, he/she may rewrite the the piece for a higher grade.  Students who earned an C had very short pieces.  If you have questions about your score, please e-mail me.
-MrBoZ

Note- I was going to have sections 2 and 3 write these as well, but I decided that the questions I have graded were enough.

Thursday, February 12, 2015

Scoring the long answer questions for Bobby Fischer

I would like to open the results of my scoring for discussion, for those who would like to participate.

I have made a page with all the long answer responses and the scores I gave them.  I would be curious to see if you agree with my scores.

For example, do you see any places where I gave a response a 95% or above where there is an 85% that is just as good?

Rubric I used in my head to score.

  • The response had a topic sentence.
  • The response had multiple, well explained examples from the movie.
  • The paragraph had few errors that interfered with understanding.
  • The response proved the writer understood the movie.


If you have a Google account, make a detailed comment explaining why one of my scores should be changed.  Be sure to refer to other answers using specific details.  Refer to the number on the left when discussing other answers.


Sunday, February 08, 2015

I have entered some grades on HAC

I entered two grades taken on Friday.

The first is see how the students could apply the literary vocabulary to the movie Searching for Bobby Fischer.  They were to go to this form and answer the questions with sufficient details from the movie.  I graded each answer on its accuracy and supports. This counted as a summative.


The second grade was formative.  This is one of two questions students must answer.  Students were to brainstorm these questions.  I told them that I would choose two of them.  Ultimately, I allowed them to do the one the felt the most confident about.  On Monday or Tuesday, students will answer a second question.  This time I hope they use a lot more details! I will grade the second question as a summative.

Section 1 had two other grades entered Friday.  We are done the literary and critical vocabulary tests.

Sections 2 and 3 took the literary vocabulary test as a formative.  We have been studying these words and I wanted to see how much they have learned.  They will have time to practice these words this week and take another test as a summative.

This is the list of literary vocabulary as well as the Quizlet practice page.
This is the list of critical vocabulary as well as the Quizlet practice page.

Our goal for this coming week is to wrap up applying the literary vocabulary to the movie and then apply them to the short story called The Chaperone. 


Thursday, February 05, 2015

Finishing Bobby Fischer: Assessment

Here is what the students are working on today and tomorrow:

Objectives:
Students will have worked on the 500 word piece on how the author's choices helped convey the theme of Searching for Bobby Fisher.
Students will have typed up their answers/notes for the comprehension assessment on Friday.
Students will have practiced the literary and critical vocabulary they will need for Friday's quizzes.

Agenda:
Section 1 will enter their vocabulary homework into the responders.

Students will work on their theme discussion for part of the period. (Due by end or period Friday.)
Share your Google Doc with mrbozhb@gmail.com or use this page to turn in the document

Students can then collaborate on answering these questions for Friday.
Copy and paste these questions into a Word document. (You can use these notes on Friday.)
Your answer should restate the question in the answer.
Your answer should be detailed and to the point.  Not too long or too short.

Practice using these Quizlets for Friday's quizzes.

Standards
CC.8.R.L.2 Key Ideas and Details: Determine a theme or central idea of a textand analyze its development over the course of the text, including its relationship to the characterssetting, and plot; provide an objective summary of the text.
 CC.8.R.L.3 Key Ideas and Details: Analyze how particular lines of dialogue or incidents in a story or drama propel the actionreveal aspects of a character, or provoke a decision.
 CC.8.R.L.6 Craft and Structure: Analyze how differences in the points of view of the characters and the audience or reader (e.g., created through the use ofdramatic irony) create such effects as suspense or humor.
CC.8.L.6 Vocabulary Acquisition and Use: Acquire and use accurately grade-appropriate general academic and domain-specific words and phrases; gather vocabulary knowledge when considering a word or phrase important to comprehension or expression.

Wednesday, February 04, 2015

It's time to demonstrate mastery of the standards


Homework:
Section 1 should have completed pictionaries, choosing, and synonyms for unit 7.
All sections could take time to prepare for the writing we will do over the next two days.

Standards:
CC.8.R.L.2 Key Ideas and Details: Determine a theme or central idea of a textand analyze its development over the course of the text, including its relationship to the characterssetting, and plot; provide an objective summary of the text.
CC.8.R.L.3 Key Ideas and Details: Analyze how particular lines of dialogue or incidents in a story or drama propel the actionreveal aspects of a character, or provoke a decision.
CC.8.W.2.a Text Types and Purposes: Introduce a topic clearly, previewing what is to follow; organize ideas, concepts, and information into broader categories; include formatting (e.g., headings), graphics (e.g., charts, tables), and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
CC.8.W.2.b Text Types and Purposes: Develop the topic with relevant, well-chosen facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples.

Here are the links students will need to do the next assignments:  
                Constructed Response 
                  
Finding the theme in the movie 
due Friday, February 6
                
 Bobby Fischer Discussion Questions
                  Article on details use by screenplay writer
                  Script of movie for dialogue quotes
                 

Tomorrow and Friday, students will be using the computers to write two things.
1. Students will have prepared the 16 questions below.  On Friday, they will enter answers for two of the questions into a Google Form.  The response must rephrase the question in the answer.  There should also be enough supports to demonstrate understanding of the movie and the characters.(See blue below)
2. Students will have written 500 words explaining how the writer's choices conveyed the theme.(See red below)

Searching for Bobby Fischer: discussion questions
1.     What was life like when you were seven?  What things were important to you?  Explain. What is important to Josh?  Is he a typical 7-year old? Why or why not? Explain.
2.     Why doesn’t Josh want to play chess with his dad?  What does this tell us about his character? What might the film-makers be trying to accomplish in that scene? Was it effective?
3.     How has the dialogue contributed to the development of the movie so far? What was done to make the dialogue seem natural?  Give examples and explain.
4.     Who was Bruce Pandolfini? Why does he insist he doesn’t teach any more when talking to Josh’s dad?  What was the significance of the conversation on the phone beforehand?  How did those two brief conversations develop Pandolfini’s character? Explain.
5.     Who is the man in the park that plays chess with Josh?  What does he teach Josh?  Explain.
6.     What’s the moral dilemma the parents struggle with to determine if they should let Josh learn chess from Bruce Pandolfini?  Explain.
7.     What’s wrong with Josh playing chess in the park?  Explain.
8.     Explain the tension between Josh’s mom and Pandolfini.
9.     Why do parents get so intense about the chess games when the kids don’t seem to mind?  What are the things in your life the adults care more about than you do?  Explain the significance.
10.  How are Bruce and Vinnie opposites? How are they similar?  Whose philosophy do you agree with more?  Explain.
11.  If you were Josh’s parents, what might you do differently?  What are they doing right?  Explain.
12.  Evaluate the movie’s ending.  Was it satisfactory?  Explain.  How might you have it end differently if you were the director?
13.  What’s the difference between a prodigy and someone who works hard?  Which one is more valuable?  Which would you rather be?  Using examples from the film, explain your answer.
14.  How important is it to be a normal kid?  In what ways does our society force kids to grow up too fast?  In what ways should we expect people to be more grown up?  Explain.
15.  Does Josh have friends his own age, or are they competitors?  What’s the difference?  Explain.
16.  Break down the dialogue in a specific scene.  Briefly describe the scene and the dialogue.  What was the film trying to accomplish with the dialogue?  How effective was it?  Explain.

Bruce: You have no idea what I want. What is chess, do you think? Those who play for fun or not at all dismiss it as a game. The ones who devote their lives to it for the most part insist that it’s a science. It’s neither. Bobby Fischer got underneath it like no one before and found at its center, art. I spent my life trying to play like him. Most of these guys have. But we’re like forgers. We’re competent fakes. His successor wasn’t here tonight. He wasn’t here. He is asleep in his room in your house. Your son creates like Fischer. He sees like him, inside. Fred: You can tell this by watching him play some drunks in the park? Bruce: Yes. You want to know what I want. I’ll tell you what I want. I want back what Bobby Fischer took with him when he disappeared. 

Theme: Searching for Bobby Fischer
Here are some suggestions for discussing the theme of Searching for Bobby Fischer. Choose one or come up with your own.  Do not just answer the questions and write them in order.
 For each of these topics, you are expected to discuss the main characters in the movie, their motivations, internal and external conflicts, and their influence on Josh.
 Remember, you are explaining how the writer’s choices (plot, characters, point of view, etc.) help convey the theme.  Explain the theme.  How what it developed? Prove this is the theme.

1. Who is in charge of how our children turn out?
  • ·To what extent are parents responsible for the success or failure of their children?
  • ·      How do parents’ own childhoods guide the decisions they make with their own children?
  • ·      Do parents have the right to impose their hopes and dreams on their children, fix their pasts by giving their children what they never had?
  • ·      Are parents even aware of the source of their decisions?
  • ·      Have parents as sons done enough to please their fathers?

2. How is life is like a chess match?
  • ·      How do people have different philosophies about chess, and are these are also ways to live life?
  • ·      How do the ways the characters view opponents also transfer over to how they see people?
  • ·      How did these views change in certain characters?
  • ·      What is the reason for a character to not change throughout a story?

3. How important is winning?
  • ·      What is a healthy level of competition?
  • ·      What is the difference between a career in competition and an obsession?
  • ·      They are searching for the next Bobby Fischer.  Should we really want a next Bobby Fischer?
  • ·      What is most important in life?

4. The person we are today is the result of many people trying to guide us.
  • ·      Who are the people trying to guide Josh?
  • ·      In what ways did each one give good guidance?
  • ·      In what ways did each have flaws?
  • ·      How is Josh the result of these influences?
  • ·      Is Josh his own person able to make his own decisions? 


Stick to the details in the story.  As much as you would like to explain how you relate to the story and the theme, this written piece is not about you
Just explain what the theme is and how you know by using details from the movie.
 Characters: Josh, Dad, Mom, Bruce, Vinnie     Bruce’s Teacher/Jonathan   Other dad/Morgan