Friday, December 13, 2013

Rough outline and packet due on Monday for sections 1 and 2

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Today should have been Wednesday on my schedule to complete Flowers for Algernon, so we worked hard to get caught up.

Section 1 had time to complete the packet which I collected.  We had been reading the story in class, and they should have been doing this at home. They will work on writing their outlines Monday in class.

In sections 2 and 3, I spent time discussing themes in depth this week, which means they could not take notes as we read.  I gave them time to work on the packet today.  Their packet and rough outline are due Monday.

The packet is brainstorming for the essay which is due Friday, December 20.

Below is the organization sheet I gave the students today.  I am not going to just give them an outline to fill in.  This sheet is meant to show students how they COULD chunk their talking points.





Outlining for Flowers for Algernon Essay

Question you need to answer: Would Charlie have been better off if he had never gained the knowledge?   (YES/NO)  Now prove it.

Consider how he feels at different points in the story.

Charlie before the operation

Charlie as he gets smarter

Charlie as he loses his intelligence

Charlie at the end of the story


What can we use as points of comparison?
Relationships
            Miss Kinnian
            Guys at the factory
            Landlady
            The doctors

Charlie’s aha moments
            List the things he learned about life and himself.

Algernon
            Was Algernon better off for having had the operation?

Point of View
You must remember that this piece is written from Charlie’s point of view.
Sure, you can get his thoughts, but how reliable are they at different points in the story?
As you make judgments about Charlie, you MUST infer from the reactions of others.

The essay should demonstrate these skills:
You understand the story.
You can support your position with details from the story.
Your supports are accurate.

Summary
Somewhere near the beginning of the essay, you need to include a very brief summary of the story.  This is used to focus the reader and provide a context for your discussion.  Give just enough to get the discussion started.