I read straight across. Was there a useful hook? Did it catch my attention yet was not a thesis? Did the thesis stated exactly what will be argued?
Were there three topic sentences that focused the paragraphs? Could each topic sentence be explained with details? Did each topic sentence explain the thesis?
The topic sentences hold the piece together. Use transitions between paragraphs. Beneath each topic sentence, there should be lots of explanation of the topic sentence and supports for your thesis.
See the last blog entry for the links.
Alfaville video
Carl Jung
Get it? It's a psychology pun! :)
Any '80s parents out there?
