Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Essay due Friday

Homework:
Essay due Friday (see below)

Today:
We analyzed three different summaries to determine the qualities of a concise summary.  I have listed the book's example below.  It meets most of the rubric, but more importantly it gives a nice overview of the story and the theme.



Summary Rubric
____ 1. FFA is a story about (Main Char.)
____ 2. The story is set in ______ (place, time)
____ 3. Describe the main character so we get
             a feel for him.
____ 4. What other characters are part of story?
              What is their relation to main?
____ 5. Break story into 4 or 5 main movements
____ 6. What is the conflict/tension that keeps you
             reading?
____ 7. Climax and Resolution
               How did the characters change/ learn
               about life?
____ 8. In the end…
____ 9. What is the theme (lesson) of the story?
____ 10. Grammar errors are not DISTRACTING     


Concise summary from my teacher book:

Charlie Gordon is a 37 year-old man with low mental ability.  His teacher, Miss Kinnian, recommends him as a candidate for an experiment in which the intelligence of a white mouse named Algernon has already tripled.  Charlie’s progress is charted through the journal he keeps.  After undergoing the surgery, Charlie becomes a genius and acquires tremendous academic knowledge, as well as a painful awareness of human failings.  When Algernon begins to regress, Charlie starts his research to see if he can solve the problem.  He discovers flaws in the doctors’ theories and realizes that his own intelligence will also deteriorate.  Ultimately Algernon dies.  Charlie returns to his original level of intelligence but is unable to return to his own life.  He moves away, asking his friends to continue the practice of placing flowers on Algernon’s grave. 



 
Writing Assignment for Flowers for Algernon

Requirements:
____ Typed in Times New Roman sized 12 (or written neatly)
____ Multiple paragraphs with introduction, supports, and conclusion
____ 400 – 700 words (a little over if needed- just not a book!)
____ Grammar errors should be minimal and not distract from reading
____ Your piece is clear, detailed, and shows you understand the story


Choose one of the following topics-
·      Include a summary of the story
·      Thoroughly explain your position
·      Use examples and direct quotes from the story
·      Be sure to refer to the packet you completed

1.  Do you think the doctors should have performed the operation on Charlie?

2. If given the opportunity, do you think Charlie would have the operation again?  Compare his life before the operation to his life after the operation.

3. What kind of society would we have if everyone had the opportunity to become super intelligent?

4. If this type of operation were being tested for real, right now, would you participate in the study?

Five paragraph outline

P1
Handshake- get us thinking
Thesis- tell us what you will prove exactly

P2
Summary of the story focusing on details that lead to your discussion

P3
Topic sentence for reason one.
Explain
Explain
Explain

P4
P5
Conclusion