Tuesday, October 09, 2012

I will check off the Good Rough Draft Wednesday

I would like the students to come in with a finished draft that follows the brief outline below.  The better the draft, the better the feedback can be.  We will continue to discuss how to shape the final draft.

We are also doing a four lesson unit on pronoun/antecedent agreement.  I listed some notes below.  Tomorrow I will review what we did today and start another lesson.  I do not want these lessons to be huge.  I just need to cover the basic idea.  I plan to use responders to assess their progress.


Response to literature:

Start with a focusing statement (focus of critique?)

Summarize story to give context for your commentary (Can you summarize in three sentences?)

Critique and connect to the text

Give examples to prove your focus

Finish with a strong summary


Lesson 7: Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement

The antecedent is the noun or pronoun that a pronoun replaces.

The Hopi people made their homes in the desert.
The Hopi people settled what is now Arizona. They have been here for more than ten centuries.

Mrs. Jamison teaches the class.  Mrs. Jamison is great!

Pronouns must agree with their antecedents in number, person, and gender.            
Number
Hopi culture, in all its forms, is alive and well.
Traditional members keep cattle on their farms.
Person
Tribal elders tell the myths of their people. (3rd person) possessive pronoun
We like to listen to our grandparents’ stories. (1st person)
Visitors realize you can learn…NO
Visitors realize they can learn…
Gender
Derrick Davis performs his hoop dances.
Laurel Mansfield teaches her students.

Each dancer has his or her favorite dance moves.
Dancers have their favorite moves.