Monday, December 19, 2011

Final draft of ant essay due Wednesday!

A few more winners added!
Sections 3, 6, and HB:
I took these students to the library to type up their final drafts.  I have had too many students who did not turn in outlines and drafts on-time to risk not getting the final draft.  The ant debate is geared towards producing a great persuasive essay.  If the debates have to wait, then they wait.  Students can't learn writing if they don't write!  Too many are choosing not to write.  My job is to get them to write.  So I am making them do it right in front of me.


Sections 4 and 5 continued their debates.



Here are the requirements for the final draft:

___    P1 Create a new handshake and thesis for the introduction.
___    P2 Write a very complete body paragraph (12 sentences) that supports your position.
___    P3 Explain what your opponent would say about the issue.
___    P4 Explain how your opponent is wrong based on your research.
___    P5 Conclude the essay with a summary and a “call to action.”
___    Be sure you have 6 transitions in your essay.  Underline them.
___    Be sure your bibliography is correct. 
___    Your piece should be grammatically perfect.  Have someone else look over it.
___    Use Times New Roman font sized 12, single-spaced.
___    Indent all paragraphs. 
___    Correctly punctuate book and article titles.    

Transitions-

Similarity
   Likewise,
   Similarly,
   Just as…
   In the same way…

Contrast
   On the other hand,
   However,
   Although…
   Nevertheless…
   Instead…
   Not only…

Sequence
   Next
   After…
   Finally,
   First, second, third

Accumulation
   Moreover,
   In addition,
   For example,


Twelve Types of Introductions-
Humor                                Imagery and Details
Dialogue                            Quote
Question                            Anecdote
Excite Curiosity                Bold and Challenging Statement
Pretending                        Real-Life Emotion
Nostalgia                            Amazing Fact or Statistic
  
 
Be careful punctuating titles and quotes from the book and the movie.

Use The Ant Bully or The Ant Bully because it is a movie title.

In the story Hey, Little Ant, the boy says, “Hey, little ant down in the crack,/ Can you see me, can you talk back?

Transcribe poetry exactly as it is.  Use  a / to divide the lines.

According to the article Ants Defeat Enemies,” ants defeat their enemies!