Tuesday, September 30, 2014

Two big projects we are working on and the PTA Refections Contest

Today I set students up with the classroom wiki. (This site requires a password.)  The classroom wiki is where I would like students to work on their short story and their book review.  I will give students some computer time in class, but most students will have to be working on this project outside of class.

Book Review
The book review is due October 20.  The requirements are on this blog post as well as an example.

Short Story 
The short story will probably be due October 30th.
The classroom wiki has exactly what the students need to do for their short story.  Examples can be found on this page as well.  I also posted what the students have on their pages below.  I am expecting students to log on to the wiki and work on their stories.


EXTRA CREDIT
The PTA Reflections Contest has a category for short story.  The theme this year is The world would be a better place if.... I am offering 2 extra percentage points for students to write their short story on the PTA theme and submit their piece for the contest.  Here are the rules and requirements that I will be discussing with the students soon.




Name:
Section:

I want to see your short story planned out in detail.
(See below the outline for explanations of each section.)

QUICK Short Story Planner
1. Setting (and why it matters)


2. Character 1 (main, dynamic, round)
Physical Characteristics
Has a problem/choice to make

3. Character 2 (static, flat)
Will interact with C1 to produce change
Physical Characteristics
Has his/her own issues

4. Event/Plot – situation (conflict) to affect change
Determine how C1 will change and problem acted on

5. Theme- What lesson does C1 learn?

DETAILED Short Story Planner
1. Setting (and why it matters)


2. Character 1 (main, dynamic, round)
Physical Characteristics
Has a problem/choice to make

3. Character 2 (static, flat)
Will interact with C1 to produce change
Physical Characteristics
Has his/her own issues

4. Event/Plot – situation (conflict) to affect change
Determine how C1 will change and problem acted on

5. Theme- What lesson does C1 learn?


Determine your Narrator

Explain the effect of having your narrator be each of the following:

1st Person-

3rd Person Limited-

3rd Person Objective-

Can you plan enough to give your narrator a personality? What I mean is, the narrator is not YOUR Voice.
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A good story has five very important elements.
(You will need much more space than this to write out your plans. If you are typing this, take all the space you need. Otherwise, use paper and leave lots of room for your SPECIFIC details.)

Introduction


Initial development


Provocation


Action


Resolution




I would like you to create a storyboard.


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Start writing your story here:


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Explanations of each of the requirements above

Topic choice: Appropriate or inappropriate?
Tips:
  • When generating a short story idea, you must find one that pushes a reader’s limits, but not too far.
  • It is okay to provoke your readers a little, but not so much that they won’t take you seriously.
  • You also don’t want a subject that is so safe that your readers will find it boring.
Three essential aspects of a short story
  • Characters in a short story must always have a good reason for doing whatever they do.
  • You must set up whatever happens in a story. Nothing ever just happens.
  • The main character of a short story must goes through some major change in behavior or personality as a result of the events in the story.
Stage 1- Infancy: Basic concept
  • It involves either a person or an even. On occasion it involves both, but rarely.
Stage 2- Childhood
  • An idea in its childhood is just like the one in its infancy, with the addition of a problem.
  • To move an idea from infancy to childhood, you must ask, “What’s wrong?”
Stage 3- Adolescence
  • The problem is usually something the main character is unmotivated to solve.
  • To move from childhood to adolescence, you must introduce a reason to take action on the problem.
  • “Why does the main character care about the problem?”
You must introduce two factors:
  • The action the main character decides to take.
  • You must fill in any gaps and answer any unanswered questions- such as setting up the events in the story.
Stage 4- Adulthood
  • An idea in its adulthood is a person or even with a problem and a reason to confront it.
  • It also includes the action the main character takes on the problem, even it that action is doing nothing at all.
  • It also includes the answers to unanswered questions and fills in gaps.
Idea process
  • When you finish this idea generation, you will probably have written several pages.
  • You must always plan the end of your story before you even start to write it.


Example: A U.S. Senator that has a drug problem is being blackmails by a colleague. The senator then decides to hire an assassin to kill his colleague. The assassin gets caught and turns in the senator. The senator goes to train and has to train dogs to detect drug scents (irony).








When writing a story, you must use your notes.

A good story has five very important elements.
  1. 1. Introduction
  2. 2. Initial development
  3. 3. Provocation
  4. 4. Action
  5. 5. Resolution


Introduction
Introduce the main character
  • Give physical attributes if possible.
  • Show the main character taking some action that gives a clue to who he is or what he is doing without actually saying it. (I would not open my story by saying, “There was once a man sitting in a therapist’s office.”)
Initial development
  • Describes the problem
  • Sets up future events in the story
Provocation
  • As the story progressed, I had to give the main character a reason to act to at least think differently about his situation.
  • The purpose of the provocation section of the story is to give the main character a reason to address his problem.
  • Without the provocation, there is no point to the short story, and the main character cannot develop.
Action
  • The action part of the story is just that. The main character decides to do something about his problem.
Resolution
  • The purpose of the resolution is to show the results of the action the main character took.

Tips
  • Writers most frequently ignore the initial development, which describes the problem in detail and sets up future events in the story.

  • You can write a rough draft of a short story in an hour.

Section 1 students have started Vocabulary Workshop!

They are so happy!  Over the next two weeks, I will be introducing them to the routine I use for the book.  Tonight they are to draw little pictures for each word.  I call them pictionaries.  They are also to do the Choosing the Right Word. ALL HOMEWORK will be check for accuracy. If students have done the work correctly, as determined by the responders, they should do just fine on the vocabulary quizzes.


Friday, September 26, 2014

Tonight I am composing without a keyboard

I have spent the last two hours going over the introductions for the book reviews for section 1. I was trying to find the best way to use my iPad to sit comfortably and read their pieces and offer feedback. (Yes I know it's Friday and I should be doing something more fun, but honestly I really don't have anything more fun to do tonight.) 

What I found was you can't use the keyboard obviously. But what I could use were table boxes. I read their introduction and then offered feedback. All the feedback was given orally using voice recognition on my iPad and then translated by the iPad. I've never done this before. I've taught writing for 20 years and feedback is usually typed or written, especially with a red pen. I find it freeing yet difficult to compose as I'm looking at the piece trying to put words together as the computer is typing. In fact this last paragraph has been typed by me dictating to the air.

I also created a little video that explains what I did this evening. I am trying to use video more for my blogging and for my instruction using a program called Movenote. The link that I have included in this blog is for that video.

If the students in section 1 have time this weekend they can go to their book review and see the feedback that I gave them. The goal for next week will be to have them finish the introduction to their book review and maybe have a rough draft by the end of the week. I am using the online wiki so that students can continually get feedback on the work that they are doing. The book review is still due by the end of the marking, but students need to be working on it now.



(I did go back and edit this using the keypad on the iPad. There were some errors that were not picked up by the voice recognition; however, most of the typing was correct. Have a nice weekend!)

Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Author's Style Notes: Students should use these terms in their book reviews

These notes are from the Level Up we watched yesterday.  The link is in yesterday's blog entry.  I showed students how to log onto their online books today.

Extra Credit:
Sections 2 and 3 can do an extra Achieve article and earn extra credit for the week.  They only need to to the poll question and do well on the activity questions for the extra credit.


Notes from Author's Style Level Up

Style is the way a particular work is written- not what is said but how it is said.  A style is unique, because it is the result of a writer's individual choices.  These choices give the written work its voice, or personality.

Many elements help to create a writer's style, including word choice, sentence structure, tone, and the use of figurative language.

Word Choice
Short or long
Technical or slang
Conversational or formal

Sentence Structure
Short, simple
Long, complex

Use of Imagery
Figurative language
Simile
Metaphor
Personification

Voice- Personality comes through writer's style

Tone- writer's attitude toward subject
Serious or humorous
Formal or informal
Angry or peaceful

Three common styles of writing are ornate, conversational, and plain.

Ornate Style
Sophisticated word choice
Complex sentences
Parenthetical expressions

Conversational Tone
Easier for readers to follow

Plain Style
Easy to understand
Less chatty
Simple, direct sentences

Precise word choice

Monday, September 22, 2014

Important Information

I updated grades on HAC
There is now a summative.
A few too many students are not turning in work.  :(

Assignments for the week:
KBAR due Friday.
Achieve for sections 2 and 3.
Quiz on academic vocabulary: Practice 1, Practice 2.

We viewed this video in class today.
Section 1 has their logins for the online book.  Sections 2 and 3 will get theirs tomorrow.
http://my.hrw.com/la_2010/na_lit/nsmedia/levelup/lit241/lit241.html

Today:
Section 1 had book exchange.
All classes read the Book Review sample.  The book review must be written by the end of the marking period.  Sooner is better.  I want students to peer edit and offer suggestions.
I will have a web page for them to enter their reviews. (Section 1 already has this.)

Students will also make a small poster to get others interested in reading their book.
I have not shown them an example of this yet.

Short Story
I am getting off track with students writing a short story.  I am finding I have too much to cover for Tom Sawyer.  As soon as I feel we have done what we HAVE TO DO for Tom Sawyer, we will apply what we have been studying to writing their own stories.  As of now, the final short story is NOT DUE next Wednesday.


Friday, September 19, 2014

Vocabulary Test Friday 9/26


Resources to prepare for the test
Academic vocabulary practice
Tom Sawyer vocabulary practice

Online book for sentences and questions
 (Username and password are your student ID.  You may need some zeros! E-mail me if you need it.)









Academic Vocabulary (Just define)
Irony
Theme
Word choice
Imagery
Narrator
Point of View
Third-Person Point of View
Third-Person Limited
Omniscient Point of View
Style
Mood
Tone
Dramatic Irony

Situational Irony
Verbal Irony

Vocabulary (see directions below)
Tranquil
Alacrity
Survey
Dilapidated
Contemplate
Covet
Particular
Attain

Directions for Tom Sawyer vocabulary
1.     Write the word
2.     Copy sentence word is in from Tom Sawyer
3.     Definition
4.     Part of speech (noun, verb, adjective)
5.     Draw a picture to represent
6.     Answer questions on page 403 in the book