Thursday, November 14, 2013

Punctuation notes from Poe discussion Sections 2 & 3


Homework:
  • Sections 2 & 3 should bring in the best draft possible tomorrow for one last check.
  • Sections 2 & 3 should  have completed at least the Choosing the Right Word and the Synonyms pages for tomorrow for Unit 5.
  • Sections 2 & 3 should review The Treasure of Lemon Brown for some assessments tomorrow. 
  • All Sections should have completed 10 Achieve articles by now.
  • Section 1 has a vocab quiz on Unit 4 tomorrow.
 The final Poe essay is due Monday. 


Examples for Thursday discussion Poe

"The Tell-Tale Heart" is a short story by Edgar Allan Poe first published in 1843.
(You can use quotes for a short story title.)

We have also read The Cask of Amontillado and The Pit and the Pendulum. 
(Since we are typing, we can just use italics.)

It follows an unnamed narrator who insists on his sanity after murdering an old man with an "evil eye", which was pale blue with a film over it.
(!!Error!! The comma should be inside the quotes.)

For example a senseless person would say, “But why will you say that I am mad? The disease had sharpened my senses.  Above all was the sense of hearing acute.”
(The “B” is capitalized because it is in the text.)

One example is when he says, “…why will you say that I am mad?” 
(The ellipsis or … is used because the quote is starting in the middle of a line.)

He believes that he is calm and rational and that he has made a good plan taking seven long nights to commit the murder of the old man: “And this I did for seven long nights – very night just at midnight – but I found the eye always closed; and so it was impossible to do the work; for it was not the old man who vexed me, but his Evil Eye.” 
(The colon : is used because the quote that follows is used an example.  There needs to be a complete sentence before the colon.)