Tuesday, December 13, 2011

The rough drafts of the ant essays are due tomorrow.

Parents, please do whatever you can to make sure that your child is ready for tomorrow.  I am doing all I can to help them do well on this project.  Today we read two example papers.

Here are twelve suggested handshake ideas for the introduction paragraph:

(Handshake) The boy in the story has a decision to make: should he squish the ant or not? After researching ants and exploring the topic, (Thesis) I am going to prove to you that the boy in the story should squish the ant. He should squish because reason 1, reason 2, reason 3.

12 Types of introductions
Grab our attention. Walk us out the board.  THEN tell us exactly what you will prove.
Humor
Imagery and Details
Dialogue
Quote
Question
Anecdote
Excite Curiosity
Bold, Challenging Statement
Amazing Fact or Statistic
Real-Life Emotion
Nostalgia
Pretending