Monday, December 12, 2011

Apparently, "Your outline is due Monday" means something else to the students!

Too many students did not turn in the completed outline.  I will accept them tomorrow for two grades down.  Please check HAC to see if your child was one of those who "misunderstood" what I meant.

The rough draft of the essay is due on Wednesday.  It needs to be legible so we can see what needs improvement.

Today, we watched a practice debate so the students know what to expect.  Below is the sheet I discussed.  I will probably give them a copy tomorrow.  (Maybe I will make it available for those who care.)  I guess I am frustrated because I am leading horses to water, but they are refusing to drink.  I don't want to see students earn low grades.  I work so hard to get them prepared.



Ant Debate Scoring
This is the tally sheet the audience uses while listening to the debate.  See the suggestions below for assigning points.  Every point counts.  To win, you should have a strategy.  Try to get all the points you can.  Even if you don’t have lots of strong facts, a smooth presentation with visuals could get you a win!

Squisher:
You determine the winner.  I am teaching you how to be critical.  Don’t just sit there!
Nonsquisher:
Introduction (1-5) _____
They must have a handshake and thesis.
2 if not prepared and uses the one provided
3 if uses mine
4 if modified mine
5 uses own
Introduction (1-5) _____
Good points (plus 1)
False or lame (minus 1)
Use tally marks.  After each statement made, decide where a mark belongs.
Good points (plus 1)
False or lame (minus 1)
Main Argument
I give them a tally mark for the statement and one each for every support they give for the statement.
Ex.
1. Reason one
    support
    support
    support
                   = 4 points
Good rebuttal points (plus 1)
False or lame (minus 1)
Rebuttal
The main focus of this section should be to comment on the other side, but they can bring in  new supports.

One point for repeating a point the opponent made.
One point for  each worthy supporting rebuttal statement.
Good rebuttal points (plus 1)
False or lame (minus 1)
Good rebuttal points (plus 1)
False or lame (minus 1)
Rebut the rebuttals & Sum up

No tally marks during the summary part.  They already said these reasons.
Good rebuttal points (plus 1)
False or lame (minus 1)
Conclusion (1-5) _____
There should be a review of the main points they had.
5- sums up and has a clear, powerful conclusion AND mentions opponent’s points from debate.
4- sums up and has a clear, powerful conclusion
3- sums up the three main points only.
2- just ends
Conclusion (1-5) _____

Eye contact (1-5) _____
Did you feel like they were talking to you?
Most are 4’s and 3’s.  Save the 5 for someone who looks at you and addresses you.
Eye contact (1-5) _____

Visuals (0-3) _____
Any cheesy visual gets at least 1 point.
For more points they must have two other good visuals and refer to them
Visuals 0-3) _____

Total:
Mentioned
Book            yes/ no (-1)
Movie          yes/ no (-1)
Article title   yes/ no (-1)
The class determines the winner as long as it is close to mine– even if we disagree!
Total:
Mentioned
Book            yes/ no (-1)
Movie          yes/ no (-1)
Article title   yes/ no (-1)







Suggestions for points
Introduction:
2 if not prepared with the one provided
3 if uses mine
4 if modified mine
5 uses own (and is good)

Intro:
 
       The boy in the story has a decision to make: should he squish the ant or not? After researching ants and exploring the topic,  I am going to prove to you that the boy in the story should (not) squish the ant. He should (not) squish because reason 1, reason 2, reason 3.

Supports
            I put one tally mark for each good support I hear that is not repeated.
            I give tally marks for supports backed up by a reference to a source

Rebuttal
            Each person should refer to each other as “my opponent” and talk to the audience

Conclusion
            3 if just uses my conclusion
            4 if my conclusion and a little more
            5 if does 1,2,3 and states a few points he/she has discussed from opponent
               and gives the listeners a directive, something to do now that they have heard the
               debate (I.E., we should vote for you because you had the better argument.)

Conclusion:
  I have proven to you that the boy in the story should (not) squish the ant. He should (not) squish because reason 1, reason 2, reason 3. I have also discussed how… (list some of the points you covered in the part where you refuted the other side.)

Relevant Details
-You are to stick to the story Hey, Little Ant.  Remember, you must have three
  main points.  You may not just list any detail you can think about regarding ants! 
-You must mention the book “Hey, Little Ant” by name. 
-You must mention the title of an article as a source for at least one detail.

Visuals
            1 tally mark up to three for using the visual to explain a support

Grades
A+  = 40
A    = 30 (must earn)
B    = 25
C    = 20
D    = 15

Only the winner of the debate can receive the A if both students earn an A!