Tuesday, February 25, 2014

Brainstorming and organizing for the argument essay

We did the Choosing the Right Word in class today.  I would like students to use tonight to fill in the sheet I posted on my blog yesterday.  I need to see how they are dividing up their reasons to support their claims and refute the counter claim.

The rough draft of the outline is not due tomorrow.  The students will take what they have written down and decide how they want to organize their pieces.  We will look at examples in class tomorrow.  We will explore the various ways students can arrange their essays to effectively communicate their message.

I felt like I needed to explain the themes in "The Bet" in a little more depth, so I took some time to write this.  The main goal of reading the story was to see the effects of solitary on a man, but I also wanted students to explore the themes. 


Themes in “The Bet”

Both the lawyer and the banker were arrogant in the beginning of the story.  They were young and made rash decisions.  The lawyer was willing to throw away years of his life to prove another man wrong to win two millions (what it is called in the story).  The banker was careless about his money believing he would always have plenty.  He also thought human life was something you could play with.

Throughout the story, the banker was intrigued by the behaviors of the lawyer in solitary, always believing that the lawyer was in it for the money. But time was cruel to both men.

The banker lost his money, and the lawyer lost his sanity and value for life. 

I believe that the writer, Anton Chekhov, wanted us to reflect on our lives.  He wanted us to compare our values to those of the banker and the lawyer. 

Through the banker, we question our own values about money.  Money can be evil and cause us to loose perspective on what is important in life.  The lawyer’s letter and act of not taking the money shows the banker that his values were wrong.

Through the lawyer, we are given a perspective on wisdom and the importance of human interactions. The 15 years left the lawyer a broken, bitter man.  The loneliness made him crazy.  Even though it might be argued that he learned more about life than most people ever would through reading books, the lesson he learned is not totally true. 

Not taking the money was noble.  Breaking the bet demonstrated the lawyer’s commitment to his stance that money is evil.  His actions showed the banker that there is more to life than money and possessions.

But the lawyer hasn’t experienced 15 years of life; he experienced books.  And while it is true that life is frail and delusive, as well as fleeting, that is what makes life so precious.  The lawyer’s view of the world was created out of his 15 years of solitude.  His wisdom is only part of the truth about life, but it is all he has.

So in the end, we see two characters that are broken by this bet.  They had to live through this ordeal and suffer.  We readers, on the other hand, can learn from their experiences.  We can look up from the end of the story and see the world around us with all the freedom we possess.  We can add their stories to our stories.  Their losses are our gains.  We have added a little more wisdom to our lives. 


In short
Watch out for your own arrogance.
Solitude crushes people and they go crazy.
Money distorts our values.
The source of the wisdom determines the value of that wisdom: perspective.